The feedback I received:
(You must address some of the counterarguments to your position in the final draft. This will require some research on your part. You mention it a little bit at the beginning, but you never revisit it.
It is okay to use the personal pronoun, “I,” when writing an editorial. This is, after all, your position.)
Description of the Editorial:
You will take a stance on an identity-related issue in an effort to convince an audience
that your position is a valid one. (3-4 page) (750-1000 words)
All the requirement are in the attachment. With the First the draft that needs improvement.
Thank you.
